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Ah you got me there - it's not the title - I hesitate to give the title - I've finished my 2nd draft of the 110 page script - registered it etc - but just putting the feelers out there & getting my pitch right - silly I know -but really appreciate this site & the wonderful feedback - and yesRead more
Ah you got me there – it’s not the title – I hesitate to give the title – I’ve finished my 2nd draft of the 110 page script – registered it etc – but just putting the feelers out there & getting my pitch right – silly I know -but really appreciate this site & the wonderful feedback – and yes family is one ‘risk’ along with his body & his faith !
See lessAfter fighting in WWII, a man returns home to his family. However, suffering from PTSD, he doesn't know how to live a normal life and only uses his piano to cope with his problems until he meets a woman who shows him how to be happy.
I think Nicholasandrewhalls has tightened this one up nicely with both of his suggested loglines above - as he states depending on the angle that is required. I prefer the second one - while being happy is all we really do need to strive for in life - it's not a compelling enough reason for most toRead more
I think Nicholasandrewhalls has tightened this one up nicely with both of his suggested loglines above – as he states depending on the angle that is required. I prefer the second one – while being happy is all we really do need to strive for in life – it’s not a compelling enough reason for most to speed to their local Westfield to part with their hard earned. But good luck – I’m sure it will be more dialogue driven than the ‘first’ (hint) PTSD movie that comes to mind !
See lessA straight-laced rookie goes undercover to catch a gang of free-running thieves, but falls in love with their charismatic leader.
An Ok Logline - the L word could be taken out - simply falls is enough & more info is needed - we can assume that makes things tricky but what is then at stake, where is the drama is it a relationships driven movie or action morals - makes me think of Point Break - good luck !
An Ok Logline – the L word could be taken out – simply falls is enough & more info is needed – we can assume that makes things tricky but what is then at stake, where is the drama is it a relationships driven movie or action morals – makes me think of Point Break – good luck !
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