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  1. Posted: April 18, 2012In: Public

    Bullet for the Soul

    Sirius07
    Added an answer on April 21, 2012 at 5:07 pm

    Thank you both for the feedback. I've been thinking over your suggestions, the female detective has anger issues related to her father, she's manager to control them through therapy and breathing exercises, her partner commits suicide which leads to her slowly unraveling (and also her partner beingRead more

    Thank you both for the feedback. I’ve been thinking over your suggestions, the female detective has anger issues related to her father, she’s manager to control them through therapy and breathing exercises, her partner commits suicide which leads to her slowly unraveling (and also her partner being possibly involved with the robberies). I’ve also been thinking of adding a subplot which will lead her to finally succumb to the violence within, possibly a domestic violence issue or the lover convincing her the person responsible for her partner’s death is a crime boss. Thank you again for your ideas.

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