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  1. Posted: April 5, 2015In: Public

    After discovering he's been raised under an assumed identity, a prized college recruit's championship hopes are threatened by his felonious, on the lam mother when he sets out to find his missing dad.

    Sonya Kennedy
    Added an answer on April 8, 2015 at 7:34 am

    setting out to find his dad, suggests he laeves college already to search for the father, where does the story go from there and how will the mother inpact it ?

    setting out to find his dad, suggests he laeves college already to search for the father, where does the story go from there and how will the mother inpact it ?

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  2. Posted: April 6, 2015In: Public

    When a down and out loser discovers a time portal where he communicates with his arrogant younger self, they attempt to create a lucrative future together, but become mortal enemies and a battle for control in this alternate reality drives him to the brink of psychosis. Refraction is a 98 page feature, psychological thriller in the vein of The Butterfly Effect or Twilight Zone.

    Sonya Kennedy
    Added an answer on April 8, 2015 at 7:18 am

    Interesting concept . This could be tricky and could take the "loser" into many directions. The "loser" should be likable as to make the audience want to "pull" for him. Or they may lose interest if it gets confusing .

    Interesting concept . This could be tricky and could take the “loser” into many directions. The “loser” should be likable as to make the audience want to “pull” for him. Or they may lose interest if it gets confusing .

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  3. Posted: April 7, 2015In: Public

    After a German student, who is afraid of changes, is getting his dream scholarship for a US film school, he is confronted with the death of his grandfather and the meeting with his biological father and has to choose between his familiar surroundings and the study before the acceptance period expires.

    Sonya Kennedy
    Added an answer on April 8, 2015 at 6:45 am

    Is his father in the US ? and if he is affraid of changes, what promted him to apply to a film school in the US ? Does he have a friend in the US ?

    Is his father in the US ? and if he is affraid of changes, what promted him to apply to a film school in the US ? Does he have a friend in the US ?

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