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Trapped in a high rise residential building a group of neighbors must learn to work together to escape their culprit.
Hi jlmarvelo, As this is posted in the thriller category I will assume this is not a horror movie. Perhaps it is a suspense. ?I am not sure what the ticking bomb is that would make it a thriller or a suspense. What is keeping them trapped? Good luck with this. Cheers, SouthWestSusie
Hi jlmarvelo,
As this is posted in the thriller category I will assume this is not a horror movie. Perhaps it is a suspense. ?I am not sure what the ticking bomb is that would make it a thriller or a suspense. What is keeping them trapped?
Good luck with this.
Cheers, SouthWestSusie
See lessAstronaut’s Grave – Death row prisoners are given freedom by the state if they can come back alive from a space exploration.
Hello, Jlmarvevalo. Thanks for sharing your logline. Is there a main character that the story focuses on? That would help to make the longline more specific and compelling. I'm assuming your character is one of these prisoners. Why will we care about this particular character's story? Is the personRead more
Hello, Jlmarvevalo.
See lessThanks for sharing your logline. Is there a main character that the story focuses on? That would help to make the longline more specific and compelling. I’m assuming your character is one of these prisoners. Why will we care about this particular character’s story? Is the person a murderer? Is the person innocent? Is the person afraid of flying? Would the person rather stay in prison? Does the person actually want to die in space? (Am just tossing out some ideas. You may already have the answer.)
Cheers, SouthWestSusie
A detective’s ex-wife asks him to find their missing son, he discovers that a mysterious old woman abducted him, and learns dark secrets about his wife and his own past, that forces him to take action.
Hi Gabriel Yakub. Your revision helped tighten your logline. Still, the the last part "their lineage" is unclear. What does that mean and in what way is it related to finding his son? How will he get his son back? Further, what are the consequences of this secret? What is at stake for finding out thRead more
Hi Gabriel Yakub.
Your revision helped tighten your logline.
Still, the the last part “their lineage” is unclear. What does that mean and in what way is it related to finding his son? How will he get his son back? Further, what are the consequences of this secret? What is at stake for finding out this secret?
Thanks for sharing your work.
Cheers, SWS
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