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  1. Posted: July 19, 2015In: Public

    When a rookie DA?s carrier is almost derailed he redeems himself when, through an old journal, he emerges into an alternate timeline and receives much needed advice from a legendary prosecutor nicknamed The Gasser

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    Added an answer on July 22, 2015 at 7:12 am

    Is the DA going back and forth between timelines each episode, or does he remain in the alternate universe? I like it either way, but I think the distinction alters the need for redemption (unless it's to himself).

    Is the DA going back and forth between timelines each episode, or does he remain in the alternate universe? I like it either way, but I think the distinction alters the need for redemption (unless it’s to himself).

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  2. Posted: July 21, 2015In: Public

    An exiled 'modified human' must help defeat a deadly faction of super-human terrorists to regain his estranged family.

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    Added an answer on July 22, 2015 at 6:53 am

    agree with other feedback - would like to add that logline insinuates he is helping someone or being helped - is he working within an organization or is he a Taken-style loner? sounds fun either way.

    agree with other feedback – would like to add that logline insinuates he is helping someone or being helped – is he working within an organization or is he a Taken-style loner? sounds fun either way.

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