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After a timid young adult is saved from armed assailants by a beautiful vampire, he is manipulated and trained by her coven to track down his elusive uncle: the de facto leader of the vampire hunters.
Thank you for the feedback. The use of the word "manipulate" was a failed attempt to show a similarity to the movie "Wanted". I did not mean that he just goes through the motions of the story with no agency. His uncle sent the armed assailants to kill him. His stakes and motivation are at first survRead more
Thank you for the feedback.
The use of the word “manipulate” was a failed attempt to show a similarity to the movie “Wanted”. I did not mean that he just goes through the motions of the story with no agency.
His uncle sent the armed assailants to kill him. His stakes and motivation are at first survival.
The timid nephew and beautiful vampire are both main characters. The nephew is slightly more main.
See lessAfter giving nourishment and shelter to a wounded, fugitive vampire, a love-struck yet timid teen joins her quest: to assassinate her Sire before he starts a vampiric civil war.
I want to think everyone for their feedback. I think that my current logline is good enough to point in the right direction while I move forward with my project.
I want to think everyone for their feedback. I think that my current logline is good enough to point in the right direction while I move forward with my project.
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