1. Posted: August 2, 2013In:

    An ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the 'Bodyguard'. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to 'watch him' and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)

    stefan smoleniec

    remember this is a log line- its a little too specific in parts aka the will williams. and then in others a tad too vague aka this accident which makes kevin think he is a body guard- but then he needs to be watched/ find a cure? Also remember that traditionally loglines start with when, As, After gRead more

    remember this is a log line- its a little too specific in parts aka the will williams. and then in others a tad too vague aka this accident which makes kevin think he is a body guard- but then he needs to be watched/ find a cure?
    Also remember that traditionally loglines start with when, As, After

    good luck

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  2. Posted: August 8, 2013In:

    Huntington?s disease suffer Jack, has discovered a power in which can prevent the death of his closest friend Gracie, he must defeat the odds and find a way to communicate or have to witness her deteriorate in front of him.

    stefan smoleniec

    I feel perhaps it is a little bit too long. remember strong loglines often start with when, after, as. Also alot of people will not know what Huntington's disease is and therefore will not be able to understand why jack is unable to communicate with gracie. perhaps something like this? "After jack dRead more

    I feel perhaps it is a little bit too long. remember strong loglines often start with when, after, as. Also alot of people will not know what Huntington’s disease is and therefore will not be able to understand why jack is unable to communicate with gracie.

    perhaps something like this?
    “After jack discovers a power which will prevent the death of his closest friend, but first he must overcome his own illness in order to save her.”

    good luck

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