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A sexually repressed teenage boy with a sex therapist mother finds an unlikely friend and business partner in the bad girl at school when they decide to start offering covert sex advice to their classmates.
This is an idea not a professional written log line. Karel’s tutorials on logline writing will help you structure a 30 Word statement in an industry professional way. Check YT for the tutorials.
This is an idea not a professional written log line. Karel’s tutorials on logline writing will help you structure a 30 Word statement in an industry professional way. Check YT for the tutorials.
See lessHapless new mother Audrey attempts to navigate the pressures and problems of motherhood. This is no easy task, especially with a selfish mother, a workaholic husband, and an oddball mothers group to contend with.
Nicholas, what you’re written is a story idea. It is not a logline. The above review offers some positive suggestions. Also I suggest you’ll benefit from some of Karel’s logline tutorials that are available, on YT. What are the pressures and problems of motherhood the protagonist needs to overRead more
Nicholas, what you’re written is a story idea. It is not a logline.
The above review offers some positive suggestions. Also I suggest you’ll benefit from some of Karel’s logline tutorials that are available, on YT.
What are the pressures and problems of motherhood the protagonist needs to overcome and why is this necessary.
The stakes that you need to state in the logline explain to readers what will be the outcome if she does or doesn’t succeed with achieving the goals.
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Loglines do not have a question. You’re the script writer and your aim is to, inform the reader not seek their Predictions. Usually log lines are around 30 words. Yours is much longer. What happens if and if not the analyst reveals the sociopath ? How will it personally affect her?
Loglines do not have a question. You’re the script writer and your aim is to, inform the reader not seek their Predictions.
Usually log lines are around 30 words. Yours is much longer.
What happens if and if not the analyst reveals the sociopath ? How will it personally affect her?
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