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  1. Posted: June 28, 2020In: TVPOD

    When a young man is cryogenically frozen for a thousand years, he must come to terms with his new life in a comical future full of robots, aliens, and space travel.

    Stephanie Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 12:05 pm

    Why not say something that suggest he emerges after being frozen. What does “comes to terms with” say what you mean and also what are the stakes what happens if he achieves his goal and what happens if he doesn’t?

    Why not say something that suggest he emerges after being frozen.

    What does “comes to terms with” say what you mean and also what are the stakes what happens if he achieves his goal and what happens if he doesn’t?

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2020In: TVPOD

    A sexually awkward high school student begins giving out sex therapy at his school to help him get his dream girl

    Stephanie Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 11:52 am

    What has motivated the teenagers desire to feign being a sex expert and how will this help him win the girl? So what if he doesn’t succeed at Gaining her attention and love? What are the stakes ?

    What has motivated the teenagers desire to feign being a sex expert and how will this help him win the girl?

    So what if he doesn’t succeed at Gaining her attention and love? What are the stakes ?

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  3. Posted: June 29, 2020In: Horror

    When two wannabe American Pickers accidentally release a demon from the strange storage unit they just won, they must track down the eccentric billionaire who reneged on the payment to discover what the creature was and how to stop the thing.

    Stephanie Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 11:49 am

    Best to have a sing protagonist not 2. It seems to me unnecessary to mention that they won the unit. The face is they opened a unit that they purchased. What will happen if they don’t stop the demon ? What is motivating the protagonist to act in this way and what will happen to him/her if they canRead more

    Best to have a sing protagonist not 2.
    It seems to me unnecessary to mention that they won the unit. The face is they opened a unit that they purchased.

    What will happen if they don’t stop the demon ?

    What is motivating the protagonist to act in this way and what will happen to him/her if they cannot fin the previous owner of the unit.?

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