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  1. Posted: June 26, 2013In: Public

    Trouble occurs in the casino night clubs. Tough men and one woman are hired to control the crowds. Can they control themselves?

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2013 at 11:00 am

    thanks. i just read a long article by a film producer. he looks at inktip regularly. he says that the best log lines ... well, here's his quote...."Learn to be as brief as possible...." Here's two of his best read log lines: 1. Independence Day - Aliens try to invade earth on Independence Day. 2. LiRead more

    thanks. i just read a long article by a film producer. he looks at inktip regularly. he says that the best log lines … well, here’s his quote….”Learn to be as brief as possible….” Here’s two of his best read log lines: 1. Independence Day – Aliens try to invade earth on Independence Day. 2. Liar, Liar – An attorney, because of a birthday wish, can’t tell any lies for 24 hours. after reading his very lengthy article, I’m going to change mine to one liners. I now agree with him…brief, be brief. what do you think? i’ll forward the article if you are interested.

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2013In: Public

    Larry Anglestand, the "Fudge King" is brutally murdered for his homosexuality and opposition to the archaic Blue Laws governing the town.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2013 at 11:12 pm

    the year, 1964, separates this script from others that might be similar, although i would find that hard to believe considering the circumstances to this real crime, and the fact that homosexual activity was AGAINST THE LAW. and, that the city officials, who enforced the laws, were some of his loverRead more

    the year, 1964, separates this script from others that might be similar, although i would find that hard to believe considering the circumstances to this real crime, and the fact that homosexual activity was AGAINST THE LAW. and, that the city officials, who enforced the laws, were some of his lovers. and, that a cop, no less, was assigned to have sex with larry in order to trap him in a sexual encounter. the cop and larry went to trial. cop innocent – cause he was “on duty.” larry guilty. larry was also against the blue laws, which were religious laws governing the town. mix religion, politics, and queers – you get murder. and that the trial was fixed…one witness had a lobotomy, one converted to being a muslim to avoid testifying. the cop who had sex with larry went on to rule the town for 30 years. come on…besides…MANY SUBJECTS ARE DONE ” again…and again…and again” in the film world. this script is part of a trilogy and the ones that follow are also strange and unsolved. i’ve created a female cop to solve the crimes… being that women were not allowed to do anything much in the 60’s.

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  3. Posted: June 25, 2013In: Public

    Larry Anglestand, the "Fudge King" is brutally murdered for his homosexuality and opposition to the archaic Blue Laws governing the town.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2013 at 9:41 am

    Hello. Thanks for your comment. My view of log lines is that they must attract the reader to go further...to read the synopsis and then hopefully to read the script. If Nike's log line is "do it", that's all you need to know. I don't believe that a log line should tell you the story. Log lines are gRead more

    Hello. Thanks for your comment. My view of log lines is that they must attract the reader to go further…to read the synopsis and then hopefully to read the script. If Nike’s log line is “do it”, that’s all you need to know. I don’t believe that a log line should tell you the story. Log lines are gimmics to get you involved. Some of the questions get answered in the synop and of course the rest should be evident in the script. The Fudge King is based on a true unsolved murder that has circumstances which are almost unbelievable. No, Larry does not die a hero. He was gotten rid of. The town is still haunted by this murder because it involved all the important figures governing the place. The truth is that Larry was killed for threatening to reveal things and I could get the same…I’m not kidding.

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