1. Posted: September 7, 2021In:

    When his son is kidnapped, an overprotective father must go on a long and tough journey to find his son.

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    They're clownfish! This needs to be clear from the logline.

    They’re clownfish!

    This needs to be clear from the logline.

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  2. Posted: March 11, 2022In:

    A group of hybrid humans and predators like Cannonbolt of Ben 10 version transformed into subsidiary ecosystem like Elysium space station must kill the mortals who stand in their way to conquer the galaxy into ecosystem by building exterior and interior dimensional planets between the dimension of universe.

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    I wanted to review but my brain just exploded.

    I wanted to review but my brain just exploded.

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  3. Posted: March 18, 2022In:

    Imprisoned cowboy elephant, Rabab (45), is presented with a 3-day do or die mission – capture a cowgirl vigilante, Sky (20), or his bomb collar will be detonated. But when Sky reveals that the Sheriff who imprisoned Rabab was involved in the genocide of Rabab’s race, Rabab must team up with Sky, take down the Sheriff and his deputies, and remove the bomb collar before his trunk blows off.

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    I love it! Here are a few things to consider: - Avoid the repetition of 'cowboy vigilante'. - Is the hero a bounty hunter who goes after elephants and aliens, or is he an elephant who catches aliens? I guess the latter. Does that make it a space western animation? - "but ... that the gangster ... haRead more

    I love it!
    Here are a few things to consider:
    – Avoid the repetition of ‘cowboy vigilante’.
    – Is the hero a bounty hunter who goes after elephants and aliens, or is he an elephant who catches aliens? I guess the latter. Does that make it a space western animation?
    – “but … that the gangster … has information about the genocide of his elephant race” can be made shorter: “
    – ; but when a standoff with the cowboy reveals details about the imminent elephant genocide”
    – leave out the interrogation of the gang leader; it’s inferior to/part of bringing him down.

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