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  1. Posted: October 18, 2014In: Public

    Los Angeles, 1956. An ambitious prosecutor's investigation into the suspicious death of a wealthy businessman uncovers the murder of a young prostitute twenty years earlier. His suspects in both crimes: the mother of the girl he loves and his father, the Chief of the LAPD.

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    Added an answer on October 20, 2014 at 4:31 am

    I just wrote a reply to this, but I'm not sure it posted, so I'll try it again. Thanks for the crit, dpg. It's funny you should bring up the roles of prosecutor vis a vie the police. I have an exchange of dialogue about that in the script. The prosecutor does indeed investigate on his own, but that'Read more

    I just wrote a reply to this, but I’m not sure it posted, so I’ll try it again.

    Thanks for the crit, dpg. It’s funny you should bring up the roles of prosecutor vis a vie the police. I have an exchange of dialogue about that in the script. The prosecutor does indeed investigate on his own, but that’s obviously not being revealed in the logline. The points in your last paragraph are extremely helpful and they’ll be helping to shape the next version of my logline.

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