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    ?Two uninspired and perpetually high film students document the final days of an emotionally destroyed detective, believing his demise will give their career the kick-start it needs.?

    SunsetCoast

    How did the detective die? Did the two uninspired students have anything to do with it or did they film it? How much are they involved in the detective's life and how did they meet him? Is this really a story about the detective with the students as incidental characters?

    How did the detective die? Did the two uninspired students have anything to do with it or did they film it? How much are they involved in the detective’s life and how did they meet him? Is this really a story about the detective with the students as incidental characters?

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2012In:

    A recently unemployed man purchases a van to make money helping people move. Through this, he encounters a persuasive gentleman who offers him extra pay to transport illegal goods. After accepting the offer, a chain of events spiral into a sticky situation where he must use instincts to save his own life.

    SunsetCoast

    The description of an 'unemployed man' seems to offer the assumption that he will do anything and not consider the consequences which of course, he does. Was he a shifty sort? Is that why he accepted the 'job' or was the offer something foreign to him? Perhaps it would be helpful to know more aboutRead more

    The description of an ‘unemployed man’ seems to offer the assumption that he will do anything and not consider the consequences which of course, he does. Was he a shifty sort? Is that why he accepted the ‘job’ or was the offer something foreign to him? Perhaps it would be helpful to know more about the man and his motivation and the theme – not just the plot.

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