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After their father dies poor, two disparate brothers move to Colorado to seek their fortunes during the Silver Mine boom in the 1800's and struggle to stay one step ahead of an opportunistic politician.
Thanks Nir - great feedback & I see your point. The politician doesn't come into the picture until after the brothers get to Colorado & tries to con them out of their mine when he discovers a gold vein that starts at the brothers mine. I do like somehow linking the politician to the father eRead more
Thanks Nir – great feedback & I see your point. The politician doesn’t come into the picture until after the brothers get to Colorado & tries to con them out of their mine when he discovers a gold vein that starts at the brothers mine. I do like somehow linking the politician to the father even if in an emotional way. I’ve actually thought about this but struggling to work out the logistics.
Tray is actually right about it being a dual protagonist with the two brothers. One is very pragmatic & the other a dreamer of sorts. They are very close & play off each other.
Thanks to you both for the tips. Gives me fodder to take back for retooling. ?
See lessAfter their father dies poor, two disparate brothers move to Colorado to seek their fortunes during the Silver Mine boom in the 1800's and struggle to stay one step ahead of an opportunistic politician.
Thanks Nir - great feedback & I see your point. The politician doesn't come into the picture until after the brothers get to Colorado & tries to con them out of their mine when he discovers a gold vein that starts at the brothers mine. I do like somehow linking the politician to the father eRead more
Thanks Nir – great feedback & I see your point. The politician doesn’t come into the picture until after the brothers get to Colorado & tries to con them out of their mine when he discovers a gold vein that starts at the brothers mine. I do like somehow linking the politician to the father even if in an emotional way. I’ve actually thought about this but struggling to work out the logistics.
Tray is actually right about it being a dual protagonist with the two brothers. One is very pragmatic & the other a dreamer of sorts. They are very close & play off each other.
Thanks to you both for the tips. Gives me fodder to take back for retooling. ?
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