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A group of friends on a camping trip have a chance encounter with an alien species and must keep them from finding out that the planet they intend to destroy is the one that they have accidentally crash landed on.
The phrase "is the one that they" is wordy. Recast the last half, such as: ...must keep them learning that they crash landed on the very planet they set out to destroy.
The phrase “is the one that they” is wordy. Recast the last half, such as: …must keep them learning that they crash landed on the very planet they set out to destroy.
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