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  1. Posted: February 9, 2016In: SciFi

    A young mechanic discovers the spaceship she stole from dry dock is capable of ending the civil war between organic and synthetic life forms, but first she must convince the on-board AI to choose a side.

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    Added an answer on February 10, 2016 at 1:58 am

    Why is the fact that she stole the spaceship important? Also, is she somehow uniquely qualified to convince the AI to make a decision (e.g. does she have some AI components in her body)? ?There's an intriguing set up here, but we're not getting the essence of the conflict.

    Why is the fact that she stole the spaceship important? Also, is she somehow uniquely qualified to convince the AI to make a decision (e.g. does she have some AI components in her body)? ?There’s an intriguing set up here, but we’re not getting the essence of the conflict.

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  2. Posted: December 8, 2015In: SciFi

    An atheist religious studies professor grieving the death of her mother is visited by a fatally wounded woman who falls into a coma after granting her god-like powers.

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    Added an answer on December 25, 2015 at 2:42 am

    This sounds more like the premise for a TV or graphic novel series rather than a specific story. What is the specific challenge that the professor needs to overcome - grieving her mother's death?

    This sounds more like the premise for a TV or graphic novel series rather than a specific story. What is the specific challenge that the professor needs to overcome – grieving her mother’s death?

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  3. Posted: December 9, 2015In: Drama

    A hitman finds himself sharing a booth in a small town diner with the mobster who hired him and his proposed victim. The killer takes a liking to his target and turns down the job, which doesn?t sit well with his employer. That?s when the guns come out and he has to do some fast talking before things turn deadly.

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    Added an answer on December 11, 2015 at 3:43 am

    This describes the climatic moment,?but I think the heart of the logline is just the second second sentence.

    This describes the climatic moment,?but I think the heart of the logline is just the second second sentence.

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