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  1. Posted: December 10, 2015In: Drama

    Draft2: The Rough-Cut! A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? & promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Dad (a Celebrated-Police-Officer!). But the son is on the ?Other-Side? of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect: The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?

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    Added an answer on December 11, 2015 at 3:40 am

    Is this the father's story or the son's story? ?The father's story is strong - he has a difficult decision to make, and that can drive the action. ?The son's story is a little unclear to me - is he just naive and fell in with the wrong crowd, or is he obsessed with something that lead him to go downRead more

    Is this the father’s story or the son’s story? ?The father’s story is strong – he has a difficult decision to make, and that can drive the action. ?The son’s story is a little unclear to me – is he just naive and fell in with the wrong crowd, or is he obsessed with something that lead him to go down this path?

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  2. Posted: December 7, 2015In: Comedy

    A New York-based, coke-addicted DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town.

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    Added an answer on December 8, 2015 at 2:13 am

    Sort of a male version of "Sister Act" with a "Green Acres" flair - could work nicely

    Sort of a male version of “Sister Act” with a “Green Acres” flair – could work nicely

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