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When a bad boy movie star agrees to a blind date, he ends up with his biggest fan – a struggling single mom, whom he falls for.
Could probably replace "agrees" with "goes on". Admittedly - I'm sure this could be chopped down. Curious to know if the concept has much energy. Not sure if "whom he falls for" is a hook or twist. Certainly I hope "bad boy" and "struggling single mom" conjures up ideas of conflict. Also - on a sideRead more
Could probably replace “agrees” with “goes on”. Admittedly – I’m sure this could be chopped down. Curious to know if the concept has much energy.
Not sure if “whom he falls for” is a hook or twist. Certainly I hope “bad boy” and “struggling single mom” conjures up ideas of conflict.
Also – on a side note. Has anyone read this book? Dpg? Richiev?
https://www.amazon.co.uk/Getting-Write-Insiders-Screenwriting-Career/dp/1615931759/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=screenwriting+jessup&qid=1588346443&sr=8-1
Apparently it’s the best one for the ever-mysterious business side of screenwriting. Which lets face it – is just as important if not more.
Cheers
See lessChris and his team plan to renovate a community of vacant row houses. After forcing a squatter out of one of the homes, they soon realize the neighborhood has a very dark history.
When a house renovator forces a squatter out of his home, he finds out the neighbourhood has a dark history, and must? After he forces a squatter out of his home, a house renovator learns the neighbourhood has a dark history, and must?? INTENTION: ? What do you think his intention is? His main objecRead more
When a house renovator forces a squatter out of his home, he finds out the neighbourhood has a dark history, and must?
After he forces a squatter out of his home, a house renovator learns the neighbourhood has a dark history, and must??
INTENTION: ? What do you think his intention is? His main objective goal? What happens next? Does he have to fight off the squatters??
OBSTACLE: Person above is right. ?Dark history? is too vague. We need something stronger and more specific. What is this guy actually up against??
I?d try to get that intention and obstacle as strong as possible.?
Anyways – good luck. Hope this helps.
See lessAfter they spend a night together falling in love, a couple part ways because of WWII, and years later, the man, presumed dead, turns up at her hometown to win her back – only to discover she is married.
Just playing with some old loglines. This one is from 2014 and I wanted the story to cut between two timelines - 1939 and 1955.Also - you could probably chop "together".
Just playing with some old loglines. This one is from 2014 and I wanted the story to cut between two timelines – 1939 and 1955.
Also – you could probably chop “together”.
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