1. Posted: April 19, 2019In:

    During a notoriously bleak winter, a wanted frontiersman must protect the family he?s taken refuge with from an unscrupulous company that wants their land.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Thanks for the feedback guys. I shall take your notes and see what I can do.

    Thanks for the feedback guys. I shall take your notes and see what I can do.

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2019In:

    Fresh from prison, a former drug dealer, struggling to rebuild his life and reconcile with an old flame becomes entangled in a world of duplicitous old friends and younger and more ruthless thugs when he agrees to help his best friend, a junkie war veteran, pay back a murderous mob boss, during the tumultuous, racially-divided week of the N.Y. Blackout of ?77.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Hi everyone. I used everyones feedback from last time. I hope it's better. This is a TV pilot btw for a limited series. 8 episodes.

    Hi everyone. I used everyones feedback from last time. I hope it’s better. This is a TV pilot btw for a limited series. 8 episodes.

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  3. Posted: April 13, 2019In:

    A rich, successful doctor with a debilitating sex addiction becomes entangled in kinky and increasingly dangerous power games with his sexy psychiatrist.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Thank you for the feedback everyone. What do you think of this one? When a sex addict meets a woman he loves and is unable to have sex with her, he reconnects with his sexy former psychiatrist, with whom he shares a volatile history with, to get to the bottom of his addiction. I wasn?t sure whetherRead more

    Thank you for the feedback everyone.

    What do you think of this one?

    When a sex addict meets a woman he loves and is unable to have sex with her, he reconnects with his sexy former psychiatrist, with whom he shares a volatile history with, to get to the bottom of his addiction.

    I wasn?t sure whether to use ?kinky? instead of ?volatile?. Also, do you think I need ?with whom he shares a volatile history with?? Is it too much?

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