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  1. Posted: November 1, 2019In: Drama

    An ex-con, a victim of childhood sexual abuse, sets out to kill a reformed paedophile, only to fall for the man’s protective sister.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 4, 2019 at 12:10 am

    There is an element of love story to it. It's a small drama.His macro intention: to move forward with his life. He wants change. He wants to be his best self.His obstacles: his past. His past demons. The paedophile next door. Getting involved with the paedophile's sister. The town. His friends and fRead more

    There is an element of love story to it. It’s a small drama.

    His macro intention: to move forward with his life. He wants change. He wants to be his best self.

    His obstacles: his past. His past demons. The paedophile next door. Getting involved with the paedophile’s sister. The town. His friends and family who constantly treat him like the violent man he use to be. Then add in – when he’s finally forced to pick a side. There’s a lot of conflict here.

    Also – his own fragile mindset is an obstacle. He is self sabotaging and he doesn’t want to self sabotage.

    The I.I. is learning there’s a reformed paedophile next door – which works as a trigger/disturbance. He can’t stop thinking about this man. The nightmares begin awake, etc. He sleeps with a gun under his pillow. Keeps the light on.

    He’s terrified of this man/hates this man – which is why his character arc is so potent when he becomes merciful. Somewhat compassionate.

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  2. Posted: November 1, 2019In: Drama

    An ex-con, a victim of childhood sexual abuse, sets out to kill a reformed paedophile, only to fall for the man’s protective sister.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 2, 2019 at 6:38 pm

    He falls for the sister, steadily grows to emphasize with this man to the point of even defending him. All whilst keeping his own demons at bay.Then a rumour about the reformed paedophile begins to spiral out of control and once again the ex-con is tested.His goal: complete parole. He wants to moveRead more

    He falls for the sister, steadily grows to emphasize with this man to the point of even defending him. All whilst keeping his own demons at bay.

    Then a rumour about the reformed paedophile begins to spiral out of control and once again the ex-con is tested.

    His goal: complete parole. He wants to move without making any waves. This is incredibly hard with a “monster” next door.

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  3. Posted: November 1, 2019In: Drama

    An ex-con, a victim of childhood sexual abuse, sets out to kill a reformed paedophile, only to fall for the man’s protective sister.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 2, 2019 at 6:34 pm

    It's strange though... The first time I posted this it got quite a positive response ha. https://loglines.org/logline/an-ex-con-travels-back-to-his-hometown-to-kill-a-reformed-child-molester-only-to-fall-in-love-with-the-mans-protective-sister/ Perhaps lose the "victim of childhood sexual abuse"? IRead more

    It’s strange though… The first time I posted this it got quite a positive response ha.

    https://loglines.org/logline/an-ex-con-travels-back-to-his-hometown-to-kill-a-reformed-child-molester-only-to-fall-in-love-with-the-mans-protective-sister/

    Perhaps lose the “victim of childhood sexual abuse”? I don’t understand what you mean by trigger words ha.

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