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  1. Posted: September 6, 2019In: Drama

    When a transgender black woman kills a mentally ill murderer, she is put on trial for life, the jury, who vary from rich to poor to caring to prejudiced,? are caught up in a spiral of grey areas – and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on September 6, 2019 at 5:35 am

    Ignoring my comment/rough overview -? what do people think of the logline? Any potential there? A hook?? In-built conflict? Also, should I get rid of this part - - "and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in"?

    Ignoring my comment/rough overview -? what do people think of the logline? Any potential there? A hook?? In-built conflict?

    Also, should I get rid of this part – – “and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in”?

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2019In: Drama

    When a transgender black woman kills a mentally ill murderer, she is put on trial for life, the jury, who vary from rich to poor to caring to prejudiced,? are caught up in a spiral of grey areas – and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on September 6, 2019 at 4:09 am

    Okay - we'll make her completely innocent... yet they still want to give her life. What do you think of "12 Angry Men" in our day and age? I mean there's plenty of in-built conflict. Perhaps the demented mentally ill murderer could be the son of a rich politician - add another layer?

    Okay – we’ll make her completely innocent… yet they still want to give her life.

    What do you think of “12 Angry Men” in our day and age? I mean there’s plenty of in-built conflict. Perhaps the demented mentally ill murderer could be the son of a rich politician – add another layer?

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2019In: Drama

    When a transgender black woman kills a mentally ill murderer, she is put on trial for life, the jury, who vary from rich to poor to caring to prejudiced,? are caught up in a spiral of grey areas – and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on September 6, 2019 at 2:53 am

    UNTITLED SOCIAL DRAMA:"12 Angry Men" for the millennial age explores how far (or how little) we've come.Racism, inequality, and prejudice - still rampant.It seems only the woman and the everyman want to save this transgender woman.Characters:1. A rock bottom singer - weathered by a misogynistic induRead more

    UNTITLED SOCIAL DRAMA:

    “12 Angry Men” for the millennial age explores how far (or how little) we’ve come.

    Racism, inequality, and prejudice – still rampant.

    It seems only the woman and the everyman want to save this transgender woman.

    Characters:

    1. A rock bottom singer – weathered by a misogynistic industry.
    Her 15 minutes are over.
    A singer who is desperate to make a difference – but is it for her career or for the world?

    2. A wealthy entrepreneur/businessman. Racist? Benign? All powerful?
    And it turns out the uncaring, unsympathetic entrepreneur has valid reasons to hate this transgender woman???

    3. A simple hothead mechanic. – He’d have reasons to feel dislike.
    A hothead who needs the money – and is bribed.
    Does he still have integrity?
    A man who doesn’t care about politics or even the trial – he only cares about cars. He slowly grows a heart.

    4. A stuttering soft spoken everyman – from Midwest. He reveals himself to have a brain.
    The honest Joe boyscout. A self righteous do gooder striving to protect this transgender woman.
    Decent and honourable yet ultimately no one is listening to him.

    5. A wealthy politician recovering from a health scare.
    A once vain Golden boy. Healed. Found God.
    Trying to figure out the man he’s going to be in phase 2 of his life. He is caught between old and new.

    They are defending a transgender black woman who killed a demented (yet mentally ill) young man who raped and murdered a woman.

    The mentally ill murderer is a millennial gone mad – desperate for attention, desensitised to what’s real and what he can get away with. He professes he did it for instagram/Facebook likes and is a self professed “artist”.

    The transgender black woman avenged her friend’s death.

    It should explore how the media manipulates and ultimately controls the trial.

    Explores: celebrity culture, media manipulation, politics, racism, prejudice, class divide, inequality, toxic masculinity.

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