1. Posted: June 2, 2013In:

    A horrific automobile accident throws two women from different walks of life into a case of mistaken identity. One woman, an Undercover Agent, fights for her life in a coma. The other women mistaken for the Agent discovers this was no accident and must fight the Agent's adversaries to find out why they are wanted dead.

    Tigerlilysummers

    Hi Jean-Marie and Richiev, Thanks so much for your feedback. It is really helpful. Only recently conjuring this one in my mind, I hadn't quite figured out how to detach from the second character :) Great tips! I hadn't seen North by North West and when I IMDB'd it the logline was inspiring: "A hapleRead more

    Hi Jean-Marie and Richiev,

    Thanks so much for your feedback. It is really helpful. Only recently conjuring this one in my mind, I hadn’t quite figured out how to detach from the second character 🙂

    Great tips! I hadn’t seen North by North West and when I IMDB’d it the logline was inspiring:

    “A hapless New York advertising executive is mistaken for a government agent by a group of foreign spies, and is pursued across the country while he looks for a way to survive”.

    My intention is to make a martial art film, so will work on revising this one and re-post it when I figure out how to bring that into it too!

    Thanks again!!
    Cheers 🙂

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  2. Posted: May 6, 2013In:

    Set against the backdrop of rainy Portland, Oregon, a young man finds himself falling in love for the first time – only to receive a letter from his future self, warning him of impending heartbreak.

    Tigerlilysummers

    From a woman's point of view, as a conceptual story idea, I think if you sharpen it up as all of the above suggest, it's got legs for a good romance film - I would want to watch it! ;-)

    From a woman’s point of view, as a conceptual story idea, I think if you sharpen it up as all of the above suggest, it’s got legs for a good romance film – I would want to watch it! 😉

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