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  1. Posted: May 30, 2012In: Public

    Ed Noble?s world falls apart when a suicide bomber murders his family. Holding the bomber?s spiritual leader responsible, Ed resorts to desperate measures to bring him to account.

    Tim Lea
    Added an answer on May 31, 2012 at 6:44 am

    Thx again Nir - I had been struggling with the antagonist idea for a while and you've given me some very interesting and helpful views on it. Thx

    Thx again Nir – I had been struggling with the antagonist idea for a while and you’ve given me some very interesting and helpful views on it. Thx

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  2. Posted: May 30, 2012In: Public

    Egotistical 90's band manager Steve Gold attempts to reform the modestly successfull boyband Xcite.

    Tim Lea
    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 3:39 pm

    I tend to agree with the other commentators - what is his over-riding reason (ie goal) in reforming the band and what are the barriers ? Is one of them now a druggie? Is one a transexual? or whatever the other (probably more appropriate) choices might be. The logline beggars the word because at theRead more

    I tend to agree with the other commentators – what is his over-riding reason (ie goal) in reforming the band and what are the barriers ? Is one of them now a druggie? Is one a transexual? or whatever the other (probably more appropriate) choices might be. The logline beggars the word because at the end of it ….

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  3. Posted: May 30, 2012In: Public

    Ed Noble?s world falls apart when a suicide bomber murders his family. Holding the bomber?s spiritual leader responsible, Ed resorts to desperate measures to bring him to account.

    Tim Lea
    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 3:30 pm

    Thx or your feedback Nir - very much appreciate it. Fundamentally the story from a top-line perspective has the potential to be viewed as unPC. Rest assured I am only too mindful of walking a fine line between controversy and bad taste. The script I believe walks this balance as the core theme is thRead more

    Thx or your feedback Nir – very much appreciate it.

    Fundamentally the story from a top-line perspective has the potential to be viewed as unPC. Rest assured I am only too mindful of walking a fine line between controversy and bad taste. The script I believe walks this balance as the core theme is the power of humanity to reconcile religious divides.

    In regards the antagonist, essentially it is extremism with the spiritual leader reflecting this. The police and the media, whilst presenting conflict towards the protagonist ultimately have some sympathy with him – even though by virtue of their roles they have a naturally antagonistic role to play – although clearly they can never express this sympathy publicly.

    Hence the delicate balance I need to draw in the logline and hence the desire to see how it shapes up with others here on logline.it.

    (PS my brother converted to Islam about 25 years ago – so I am very conscious and respectful of the Islamic religion – a tight balance to have with a controversial top-line theme ).

    Thanks for your words – hopefully this gives a little bit of additional background …..

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