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A lonely teenager becomes romantically involved with a girl who recently lost her sister, after he fabricates the death of his twin brother, who abandoned him to attend a soccer-team summer camp.
Hey, thanks for the reply! I completely agree. Initially I thought that including that might have counterbalanced any negativity felt towards the protag, as a result of the story being based around one of his lies, but in hindsight, all it does is jumble the logline.
Hey, thanks for the reply! I completely agree. Initially I thought that including that might have counterbalanced any negativity felt towards the protag, as a result of the story being based around one of his lies, but in hindsight, all it does is jumble the logline.
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This one is too vague IMO. So the story is about their travels to the restaurant? Or what happens inside? Or do the witches curse them?
This one is too vague IMO. So the story is about their travels to the restaurant? Or what happens inside? Or do the witches curse them?
See lessA guilt-stricken teenager returns to his hometown to find out who murdered the best friend he abandoned to attend university.
Thank you very much for taking the time to reply Koen :-) Great idea regarding making Bilak the driving force. Nothing worse than a passive protag.
Thank you very much for taking the time to reply Koen 🙂 Great idea regarding making Bilak the driving force. Nothing worse than a passive protag.
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