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When an ambitious archeologist finds an ancient crystal engraved with a hidden message, he funds a secret sea creature who unlocks the message so his brain remembers the secrets of the Atlantis civilisation in the crystal, allowing him to release the Talisman Knights; the so called purveyors of ancient antiques; to release their grip on him.
"funds"? Did you mean to write "finds"? "his brain remembers": why include 'his brain'? There's just too much to taken in for me to care about any of this. What is going to be the dramatic/emotional engine? The duplication of 'secret/secrets' and 'release' makes the logline sound clumsy. You may neeRead more
“funds”? Did you mean to write “finds”?
See less“his brain remembers”: why include ‘his brain’?
There’s just too much to taken in for me to care about any of this.
What is going to be the dramatic/emotional engine?
The duplication of ‘secret/secrets’ and ‘release’ makes the logline sound clumsy.
You may need to use spelling software as “metaphics” is another typo.
This seems to be all McGuffin and nothing else.