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  1. Posted: June 20, 2018In: Horror

    A cheating husband leaves a meeting from his mistress with a nasty hickey, and him trying to cover it up before his wife gets home becomes a real pain in the neck.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 2:41 am

    This sounds like a comedy short, not a horror feature, because it takes five minutes to cover it with makeup and you put a pun in there.

    This sounds like a comedy short, not a horror feature, because it takes five minutes to cover it with makeup and you put a pun in there.

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  2. Posted: June 22, 2018In: Horror

    After finding photographs of them taken while they slept, a honeymooning couple must uncover the truth behind the photographer’s identity hidden in the portraits of previous guests of the holiday home before they become just another picture on the wall.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 2:37 am

    Are they sexy photos? Is the movie stakes "embarrassment"?? How do they know to look for clues in portraits? Before they become another picture on the same walls where those portraits are? If so, where are they? If they're in public, then they must not be sexy, and the embarrassment stakes are gone,Read more

    Are they sexy photos? Is the movie stakes “embarrassment”?? How do they know to look for clues in portraits? Before they become another picture on the same walls where those portraits are? If so, where are they? If they’re in public, then they must not be sexy, and the embarrassment stakes are gone, and it’s fine if they’re up there. If they’re in private, nobody else will see them, and the embarrassment stakes are almost gone, and it’s basically fine if they stay up there. Also, this is a drama or at most a thriller, but not a horror, not as presented. And “become JUST another picture” sounds stakes-y but isn’t, because I’m pretty sure you’re not suggesting that if they don’t figure out who’s taking the pictures they’ll literally become a picture?

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  3. Posted: June 22, 2018In: Adventure

    After the high school bullies reduce the sweet librarian to tears, a popular kid with a bright future risks expulsion to lead an alliance of seven uniquely skilled students to make sure the bullies get kicked out first.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 2:23 am

    I dig what I think is the heart of it, like a high school Michael Westen but more social, trying to be sneaky and whatnot, that's fun. Does seem like a lot over some tears, though. Why not spend the time building her up? Why go straight to elaborate revenge that may cost him his future? If they'd acRead more

    I dig what I think is the heart of it, like a high school Michael Westen but more social, trying to be sneaky and whatnot, that’s fun. Does seem like a lot over some tears, though. Why not spend the time building her up? Why go straight to elaborate revenge that may cost him his future? If they’d actually hurt someone, that would make more sense. If the librarian is involved in the plotting, that makes more sense. I dunno, something’s not quite adding up. Why THIS bully? Why now, why THESE tears?

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