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  1. Posted: June 28, 2018In: Family

    Being mocked for his frequent hemorrhoids, a frustrated teenager forms a group with elderly patients to protest and make people sympathetic towards them.

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 1:37 am

    First of all, I just looked up hemorrhoids and I'm not entirely sure it's something kids would want to hear about? I say that because you put it in the "Family" category. But second, and more craft-y, I'm hung up on the word "nagged". If you had said "mocked", I would get it. But nagged? Like someonRead more

    First of all, I just looked up hemorrhoids and I’m not entirely sure it’s something kids would want to hear about? I say that because you put it in the “Family” category. But second, and more craft-y, I’m hung up on the word “nagged”. If you had said “mocked”, I would get it. But nagged? Like someone’s trying to push him into dealing with the hemorrhoids, but he won’t? But he’s willing to go to all that trouble to form a group? I’m sure you meant mocked? Anyways, this sounds like it could be pretty fun, the idea of a teen teaming up with the elderly on anything really. Just maybe something slightly less gross, if it’s for kids. 🙂

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