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When she ordered by a judge to move in with her estranged father and his family in Bel-Air, a street wise black teenager girl from the ghetto must overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes.I might be wrong, but to me Compton California is more ghetto than suburbia. I like the idea that a judge onRead more
When she ordered by a judge to move in with her estranged father and his family in Bel-Air, a street wise black teenager girl from the ghetto must overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes.
I might be wrong, but to me Compton California is more ghetto than suburbia.
See lessI like the idea that a judge on the recommendation of DCS is forcing both the teenager and the estranged /absent father to forge a new relationship.
Edited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined.
She's All That?is a teen romantic comedy movie from the 90's with the same plot. It is a modern adaptation of the classic play Pygmalion, also known as My Fair Lady. Basically a cynic man bet that he can change a naive/poor/uneducated/ugly woman into the perfect before realising that she was the womRead more
She’s All That?is a teen romantic comedy movie from the 90’s with the same plot. It is a modern adaptation of the classic play Pygmalion, also known as My Fair Lady. Basically a cynic man bet that he can change a naive/poor/uneducated/ugly woman into the perfect before realising that she was the woman of his dream all along.
At the turn of the century, there was plethora of movies based on the same theme: the ugly duckling getting transformed into a beautiful swan and getting the boy of her dream who had initially ignored her.
If you want to sound original, you may need to transpose the plot into a previously ignored social environment where the culture clash can become a source of fun.?Miss Congeniality? being a prime example. Here are some some example of unexpected social environment: gamer, lumberjack competition, extreme eating competition…
Also, I am not sure with the current political and social climate that this theme of prettifying a reluctant women for personal gratification will still resonate. The womaniser being vanquished by beauty may be a difficult sell to the #MeToo generation.
See lessA couple take up rock climbing to work out their trust issues, but when they witness a murder half way up a 200 meter cliff, they become the killers next targets and must work together to get out alive.
From what you describe, the main point of contention is not trust, it is working together. in?Oblivion, the question?Are you an effective team keeps getting asked, your film is about the same question without explicitly pronounce it. So the big question is can they work as a team? Each one of them iRead more
From what you describe, the main point of contention is not trust, it is working together.
in?Oblivion, the question?Are you an effective team keeps getting asked, your film is about the same question without explicitly pronounce it.
So the big question is can they work as a team?
Each one of them is asking the other, can we agree on a course of actions? can I trust you that you will not go and do your thing that will put me at risk? Can you act responsibly and stop taking too many risk? or in contrario can you stop playing so safe that in fact you froze and put us in more danger?
Cliffhanger has pretty much the same concept. As usual Michael Rooker stole most of the scenes. The movie is average but entertaining. However for a lot people its complete unrealistic portrayal of rock climbing can be very annoying. Please make sure that any action sequence are realistic. No long jump in snow and full mountain gear longer than Bob Beamon’s world record.
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