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  1. Posted: May 14, 2018In: SciFi

    Jesus Christ living under an alias is brutalized by two police officers and decides to fight back bringing him face to face with his estranged daughter a sergeant in SWAT. Their confrontation will decide whether humanity lives or dies.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on May 15, 2018 at 10:31 am

    The Belgium movie?The Brand New Testament (original French title Le tout nouveau testament)?is based on an equally provocative premise. It is a very good satirical comedy that despite its thought provoking and some may blasphematory is a heart warming movie with some fantastic acting. in this movie,Read more

    The Belgium movie?The Brand New Testament (original French title Le tout nouveau testament)?is based on an equally provocative premise. It is a very good satirical comedy that despite its thought provoking and some may blasphematory is a heart warming movie with some fantastic acting.
    in this movie, the protagonist is his God’s daughter and her goal is to save humanity.
    Making that same change will make your logline more logical. Also by having a vulnerable protagonist, you introduce some kind of suspense making it more attractive. Otherwise it sounds like the all powerful being Jesus Christ is not happy and is going to kicks me butts. Who us going to stop him? Nobody can. End of.

    Strange premise can make very good science-fiction movie, but the premise must be written in a coherent fashion and not turn into a gimmick. Jesus Christ is a badass run the risk of turning into gimmickry and ridicule.

    A good example of science-fiction movie based on a weird premise is the?French movie?A mere mortal (original French title Simple mortel). When a linguist specialised in dead language starts receiving coded messages he must fulfil increasingly difficult missions to save humanity. In the movie the entire humanity is at risk but with an unlikely protagonist. It has no special effect and starts as a mundane slice of French life before veering toward the weird thriller.

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2018In: Romance

    After a drunken hookup at a work party, an ad-exec realizes that he is in love with his ?work wife.? He must decide whether to profess his feelings or keep their relationship as is before she moves out of state with her boyfriend.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on May 5, 2018 at 7:16 am

    After a drunken hookup with his work colleague at ?her leaving do made him realise she is the love of his life, a meek inventor trapped in a loveless sham engagement with the domineering daughter of his boss has one night to chase her and convince her of his love before she flies abroad to get marriRead more

    After a drunken hookup with his work colleague at ?her leaving do made him realise she is the love of his life, a meek inventor trapped in a loveless sham engagement with the domineering daughter of his boss has one night to chase her and convince her of his love before she flies abroad to get married.

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2018In: Drama

    An opinionated former cult-member must convince his equally-opinionated family to leave the same cult before they commit the ultimate sacrifice – themselves. TITLE: Born to Die

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    Added an answer on April 18, 2018 at 12:54 am

    When a comet appears in the sky on the date prophetised by a doomsday cult, a former member has a week to rescue his family before they all commit mass suicide.

    When a comet appears in the sky on the date prophetised by a doomsday cult, a former member has a week to rescue his family before they all commit mass suicide.

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