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  1. Posted: April 8, 2018In: Comedy

    Edited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined.

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    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on April 9, 2018 at 11:13 am

    She's All That?is a teen romantic comedy movie from the 90's with the same plot. It is a modern adaptation of the classic play Pygmalion, also known as My Fair Lady. Basically a cynic man bet that he can change a naive/poor/uneducated/ugly woman into the perfect before realising that she was the womRead more

    She’s All That?is a teen romantic comedy movie from the 90’s with the same plot. It is a modern adaptation of the classic play Pygmalion, also known as My Fair Lady. Basically a cynic man bet that he can change a naive/poor/uneducated/ugly woman into the perfect before realising that she was the woman of his dream all along.
    At the turn of the century, there was plethora of movies based on the same theme: the ugly duckling getting transformed into a beautiful swan and getting the boy of her dream who had initially ignored her.
    If you want to sound original, you may need to transpose the plot into a previously ignored social environment where the culture clash can become a source of fun.?Miss Congeniality? being a prime example. Here are some some example of unexpected social environment: gamer, lumberjack competition, extreme eating competition…

    Also, I am not sure with the current political and social climate that this theme of prettifying a reluctant women for personal gratification will still resonate. The womaniser being vanquished by beauty may be a difficult sell to the #MeToo generation.

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  2. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Thriller

    As a giant asteroid hurtles toward Earth, an embittered doomsday prepper must choose whether to open up his shelter to his runaway ex-wife and her crazy cult friends or risk spending eternity alone.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on March 30, 2018 at 10:34 am

    As a giant asteroid hurtles toward Earth, an embittered doomsday prepper must battle desperate invaders lead by his estranged wife on its way to his bunker. Having ?the enemies between him and the bunker create tension while letting the possibility of deal with the ex-wife. I also changed the enemieRead more

    As a giant asteroid hurtles toward Earth, an embittered doomsday prepper must battle desperate invaders lead by his estranged wife on its way to his bunker.

    Having ?the enemies between him and the bunker create tension while letting the possibility of deal with the ex-wife. I also changed the enemies from crazy cultist to desperate. The implied choice to let them him sounds more plausible, but also create ambiguity: Who is the real bad guy in that situation?

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  3. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Thriller

    A man having an affair takes his mistress out to the woods when they witness two thugs dumping a body the lake.

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2018 at 10:10 am

    When a man and his mistress on a week-end tryst witness two thugs dumping a body, they must outrun and outsmart deadly pursuants through a mountainous forest.

    When a man and his mistress on a week-end tryst witness two thugs dumping a body, they must outrun and outsmart deadly pursuants through a mountainous forest.

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