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  1. Posted: October 6, 2014In: Public

    A disillusioned nuclear missile silo officer, yearning for job satisfaction, gets more than he bargained for when Earth is occupied by alien invaders and saving mankind means destroying Washington DC.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on October 9, 2014 at 4:57 am

    "Crimson tide" meets "Independence Day"! You have the ingredients for a good SF thriller in a closed environment. Now the difficulty starts in 1) making it realistic. Even if you take liberty with the real silo and missile launch protocols, it must have the feel of authenticity. 2) making it crescenRead more

    “Crimson tide” meets “Independence Day”!
    You have the ingredients for a good SF thriller in a closed environment.
    Now the difficulty starts in
    1) making it realistic. Even if you take liberty with the real silo and missile launch protocols, it must have the feel of authenticity.
    2) making it crescendo. Something has to be at stake and you have to throw more and more difficult obstacles to your Protagonist. Start with he has to save earth by killing everybody in Washington and it’s difficult to top that. Start by saving the girl and you can top that by helping the generals to save his country, save the human race.
    3) making it snappy. Because the situation is enclosed, you need to have sharp dialog to create further tension. Tarentino was tasked to rewrite Crimson Tide’s dialog for that purpose.
    4) making it fun. Unless you intend to make a drama out of it, it’s B movie subject. So don’t over intellectualise it.

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2014In: Public

    After waking from a coma, a heterosexual young woman begins to believe that the universe is plotting to put her in the arms of the female EMT that saved her life, and away from her male fiancee.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on October 5, 2014 at 9:02 pm

    When a series of chance encounters with the lesbian EMT who saved her life made her question her sexual orientation, a button-up obedient pastor's daughter must choose between a boring life with her dull fianc? and her full of life adventurous soul mate.

    When a series of chance encounters with the lesbian EMT who saved her life made her question her sexual orientation, a button-up obedient pastor’s daughter must choose between a boring life with her dull fianc? and her full of life adventurous soul mate.

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  3. Posted: September 30, 2014In: Public

    After waking from a coma, a heterosexual young woman begins to believe that the universe is plotting to put her in the arms of the female EMT that saved her life, and away from her male fiancee.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on October 5, 2014 at 9:02 pm

    When a series of chance encounters with the lesbian EMT who saved her life made her question her sexual orientation, a button-up obedient pastor's daughter must choose between a boring life with her dull fianc? and her full of life adventurous soul mate.

    When a series of chance encounters with the lesbian EMT who saved her life made her question her sexual orientation, a button-up obedient pastor’s daughter must choose between a boring life with her dull fianc? and her full of life adventurous soul mate.

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