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  1. Posted: August 27, 2013In: Public

    After a Great War the world divides and is ruled by different beliefs, in order to maintain peace. An Empress finds the cure to fatal diseases and refuses to share it, unless they join the sustainable lifestyle she leads.

    Vania Berruecos Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 9, 2013 at 10:26 am

    Hey, thanks for answering! Yes, the Empress is the protagonist, yet I haven't seen her as a wicked witch, which means I've been re-writing a lot. The story is meant to be a web-comic, so she still won't be a sweet princess, but I'll relax the villainess of her character. Thanks again!

    Hey, thanks for answering!

    Yes, the Empress is the protagonist, yet I haven’t seen her as a wicked witch, which means I’ve been re-writing a lot. The story is meant to be a web-comic, so she still won’t be a sweet princess, but I’ll relax the villainess of her character.

    Thanks again!

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  2. Posted: August 25, 2013In: Public

    A bored accountant, disenchanted with life, thinks she?ll get a break on the ski slopes. Until she gets into a ski accident with a famous actor, who will do anything, including inventing a fake relationship, and turning her world upside down, to stay on top

    Vania Berruecos Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 27, 2013 at 2:40 pm

    Sounds like a good comedy! But I think it needs something that tells it apart from other movies. Also a question, why the ski accident is important? Could it be another accident?

    Sounds like a good comedy! But I think it needs something that tells it apart from other movies. Also a question, why the ski accident is important? Could it be another accident?

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2013In: Public

    A selfless man attempts to break his brother out of prison when his relationship with his wife goes sour.

    Vania Berruecos Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 27, 2013 at 2:33 pm

    Why he wants to break out his brother instead of solving his relationship with his wife? Also, first time I read it I thought the wife was actually, his brother's.

    Why he wants to break out his brother instead of solving his relationship with his wife? Also, first time I read it I thought the wife was actually, his brother’s.

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