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When a single father attempts to recreate an idyllic childhood for his son through his beloved video game, a spark of rebellion from the boy compels him to face the harsh reality of their generational divide.
Ah, I didn't realise this was for a short film. Completely different rules. Please ignore my previous comment.
Ah, I didn’t realise this was for a short film. Completely different rules. Please ignore my previous comment.
See lessA demoted police detective fights to find justice for her daughter after witnessing a grisly homicide that occurs near her newly assigned workplace.
Right now I'm confused. Does the grisly homicide have something to do with her daughter? It's unclear. Also, if a police detective witnesses a homicide, they would start investigating it, wouldn't they Do they do that? Or do they go on a separate quest to find justice for their daughter? I'm also woRead more
Right now I’m confused. Does the grisly homicide have something to do with her daughter? It’s unclear. Also, if a police detective witnesses a homicide, they would start investigating it, wouldn’t they Do they do that? Or do they go on a separate quest to find justice for their daughter? I’m also wondering how the issue of their being ‘demoted’ connects to the other elements… that suggests a professional redemption arc, rather than anything to do with their daughter.
See lessA young man in the quaint town of Ravens Circle must confront his deepest fears to uncover the eerie secrets that bind him to the malevolent force terrorizing his community before it consumes everything he holds dear.
Has potential, but is currently too vague. We need specificity in loglines. He must confront his deepest fears – what are they? Is this set in our world or a fantasy world? What time period? What is the malevolent force and how is it terrorising his community? Without specificity, we can't visualiseRead more
Has potential, but is currently too vague. We need specificity in loglines. He must confront his deepest fears – what are they? Is this set in our world or a fantasy world? What time period? What is the malevolent force and how is it terrorising his community? Without specificity, we can’t visualise the story and the logline has no impact.
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