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Through proving himself innocent of his father's death, the monk Alyosha realizes his guilt as nurtured by Father Matthias, the renowned priest and Alyosha's dark mentor.
*debbiemoon*: Thank you for your detailed critique. I found it very helpful. As you can probably tell, this was my first logline/script. In a logline, isn't a little bit of ambiquity okay? In my script you never really do find out who's the murderer. Some movies purposely keep things hanging to furtRead more
*debbiemoon*: Thank you for your detailed critique. I found it very helpful. As you can probably tell, this was my first logline/script. In a logline, isn’t a little bit of ambiquity okay? In my script you never really do find out who’s the murderer. Some movies purposely keep things hanging to further the theme. Also, does all that info (time, place, character flaw) need to be in the logline? Because it seems like most movie loglines are very succinct, very open-ended. Again THANK YOU for your help. I’m excited about developing it further using your guidelines.
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