1. Posted: January 22, 2014In:

    After an explosion, a marine wakes up in a place with other people from different times, his mission is to lead the group to recover artifacts spread in different times in history and avoid an alien invasion in the future.

    whitelady

    Actually I wasn't sure if it is better as a series,short of course, more than a movie this is still a work in progress so I appreciate your comment.

    Actually I wasn’t sure if it is better as a series,short of course, more than a movie this is still a work in progress so I appreciate your comment.

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  2. Posted: December 9, 2013In:

    After 6 weeks of grieving, a 28 year old widow's family has decided she is coming home for christmas to 'get better', whether she likes it or not.

    whitelady

    This would make a good Christmas story, and you have wonderful suggestions to improve your logline.

    This would make a good Christmas story, and you have wonderful suggestions to improve your logline.

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  3. Posted: January 17, 2014In:

    When an illegal immigrant unknowingly films the murder of the star witness in a high profile drug case, he struggles to survive the drug ring who will do anything to keep him silent while under the care of a racist detective.

    whitelady

    The premise is interesting, I have problems with the "racist detective" and maybe is important because the protagonist is an illegal immigrant or it's the detective.

    The premise is interesting, I have problems with the “racist detective” and maybe is important because the protagonist is an illegal immigrant or it’s the detective.

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