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  1. Posted: September 11, 2013In: Public

    Hot Flush is a four-part comedy-thriller about four recently-retired, over-60 women suddenly plunged into financial dire straits, due to cheating husbands and bankrupt pension companies, who ? faced with no alternative – turn to a life of crime

    Willo Johnston
    Added an answer on September 11, 2013 at 4:35 pm

    Thanks, Nicholas. Good call about specifying the crime.

    Thanks, Nicholas. Good call about specifying the crime.

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2013In: Public

    Hot Flush is a four-part comedy-thriller about four recently-retired, over-60 women suddenly plunged into financial dire straits, due to cheating husbands and bankrupt pension companies, who ? faced with no alternative – turn to a life of crime

    Willo Johnston
    Added an answer on September 11, 2013 at 4:31 pm

    Thanks, DPG. I like this but "come out of retirement" gives the wrong impression for me. They're ordinary women (not previous criminals) who are forced into crime

    Thanks, DPG. I like this but “come out of retirement” gives the wrong impression for me. They’re ordinary women (not previous criminals) who are forced into crime

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2012

    "A young New York woman, Elizabeth, who is suffering the effects of the seven deadly sins, confronts her ex-boyfriend to express her true feelings."

    Willo Johnston
    Added an answer on September 11, 2013 at 5:53 am

    I agree. There's not enough here to sustain a movie and what is is all too vague - what does "suffering the affects of the seven deadly sins" mean? And using her name, Elizabeth, seems redundant. Her name tells us nothing about her.

    I agree. There’s not enough here to sustain a movie and what is is all too vague – what does “suffering the affects of the seven deadly sins” mean? And using her name, Elizabeth, seems redundant. Her name tells us nothing about her.

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