1. Posted: April 19, 2018In:

    After losing his captcha, a tone deaf scientist must prove himself human in a music duel, or slave his life in an AI camp

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    >>>slave his life in an AI camp Your protag could be one of the many scientists monitoring this AI labour camp I agree. if the AI are replicant sorts, proving himself better musician than a clone is an interesting turing test... All the best variable!

    >>>slave his life in an AI camp
    Your protag could be one of the many scientists monitoring this AI labour camp

    I agree. if the AI are replicant sorts, proving himself better musician than a clone is an interesting turing test…

    All the best variable!

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  2. Posted: March 24, 2018In:

    When the catholic church misunderstand his intentions, a simple devout have to endure the aggravating opposition if he is to fulfill his vow. –The given word

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    sounds fun Your review post reads more "visual" than the logline you posted originally. You might wanna incorporate more tangible goals than "misunderstanding intentions" or enduring aggravating opposition" or "fulfilling vow"

    sounds fun
    Your review post reads more “visual” than the logline you posted originally. You might wanna incorporate more tangible goals than
    “misunderstanding intentions” or enduring aggravating opposition” or “fulfilling vow”

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2018In:

    A couple take up rock climbing to work out their trust issues, but when they witness a murder half way up a 200 meter cliff, they become the killers next targets and must work together to get out alive.

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    It sounds thrilling and very visual Is it a short story logline? because it lacks the fuel for a feature length film (It will however work good as a climax to some full length film on your mind)

    It sounds thrilling and very visual
    Is it a short story logline?
    because it lacks the fuel for a feature length film
    (It will however work good as a climax to some full length film on your mind)

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