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When seven actors arrive ready to shoot a horror movie but the location is desert. Soon they start dying just as the script describes.
Interesting. If you were able to hint at more of the drama behind this particular group of people then I think it could be even more interesting. Right now, it sounds like a group of random actors being killed off, which is less interesting than if the group had some type of drama-filled?history....
Interesting. If you were able to hint at more of the drama behind this particular group of people then I think it could be even more interesting. Right now, it sounds like a group of random actors being killed off, which is less interesting than if the group had some type of drama-filled?history….
See lessA troubled teen is mysteriously abducted and transported to a secluded training facility, where he and a band of juvenile misfits encounter an otherworldly enemy in a struggle for survival.
It might be more interesting if the teen is not troubled - abducted teens that are not "troubled" is against the norm...and therefore more compelling. Maybe you could make the group "girls" to differentiate it more from the maze runner... these are just suggestions. Good luck!
It might be more interesting if the teen is not troubled – abducted teens that are not “troubled” is against the norm…and therefore more compelling. Maybe you could make the group “girls” to differentiate it more from the maze runner… these are just suggestions. Good luck!
See lessA young American executive with strong family bonds seeks revenge for her sister's murder only to be confronted with the realization that the American Revolution never ended and her family secretly fights for the British side.
It's great to get some feedback and see there's some more work to be done before I've got this one fully worked out! You've given me some great things to think about - thanks!
It’s great to get some feedback and see there’s some more work to be done before I’ve got this one fully worked out! You’ve given me some great things to think about – thanks!
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