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  1. Posted: July 12, 2020In: Examples

    When a sentient video game character falls in love with the real-life player, she must get rid of the other characters to gain the player’s affections, even if that means rewriting the game script.

    YaelEinstein Penpusher
    Replied to answer on July 16, 2020 at 10:14 am

    Yes. It’s a game, not a film.

    Yes. It’s a game, not a film.

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  2. Posted: July 12, 2020In: Thriller

    A righteous but gullible whistle-blower must obtain evidence her intimidating boss is a murderous monster before he catches on and takes sadistic steps to silence her for good.

    YaelEinstein Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 15, 2020 at 11:24 pm

    Is this a bit like Disturbia when the protagonist suspects that the person is a killer but has no evidence and no one believes them? Also, I don’t think the word whistleblower fits in this situation, because alerting people to someone being a murderer is just good sense, not a controversial revealinRead more

    Is this a bit like Disturbia when the protagonist suspects that the person is a killer but has no evidence and no one believes them?

    Also, I don’t think the word whistleblower fits in this situation, because alerting people to someone being a murderer is just good sense, not a controversial revealing of corporate corruption.
    Unless you’re saying that the protag was a whistleblower in the past, so everyone is salty towards her and no one will believe her suspicions that this guy is a murderer. That would be interesting.

    If he is a murderer, and he knows that she’s on to him, then wouldn’t he just kill her straight away. Wouldn’t be a very long film. I don’t understand what the sadistic steps are, other than a plot device to draw out an otherwise short conflict. So I guess, maybe the stakes could be different. Like the protag’s friend or sister is dating him, or something, and she’s worried that he will kill the friend/sister. And no one will believe her suspicions so she has to do the dirty work herself.

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2020In: Comedy

    When a non-verbal young chef learns that her signature dish has been ripped off by a rival, she must win over a new elite clientele with her intuitive understanding of flavour and micro-dosing.

    YaelEinstein Penpusher
    Replied to answer on July 15, 2020 at 10:52 pm

    I like the ex-boyfriend addition. It makes the conflict more personal. How about: When a young chef loses a catering job because her ex-fiancé stole her signature dish, she must create a new Michelin star-worthy dish before both their restaurants are reviewed at the end of the month, even if her metRead more

    I like the ex-boyfriend addition. It makes the conflict more personal.

    How about:

    When a young chef loses a catering job because her ex-fiancé stole her signature dish, she must create a new Michelin star-worthy dish before both their restaurants are reviewed at the end of the month, even if her methods aren’t entirely legal.

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