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  1. Posted: July 9, 2020In: Drama

    A young black man accidentally travels to the past. He is decided to save his great-grandmother, a slave, with the help of her owner’s son

    YaelEinstein Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 11, 2020 at 8:00 pm

    I do like how the stakes are pretty clear without you having to specify them, as the risks of a black man during times of slavery are evident. Just the wording could be clearer. Does he travel back in time in order to save his grandfather? But what is the inciting incident? Does he get stuck in theRead more

    I do like how the stakes are pretty clear without you having to specify them, as the risks of a black man during times of slavery are evident. Just the wording could be clearer. Does he travel back in time in order to save his grandfather?

    But what is the inciting incident? Does he get stuck in the past? Is he on the run from someone who is trying to enslave him?

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  2. Posted: July 10, 2020In: Thriller

    When he learns his wife is planning to kill him, a rich man invites her secret lovers to a dinner party, and offers them each a fortune to kill her first.

    YaelEinstein Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 11, 2020 at 7:57 pm

    This could be fun! What draws out the conflict though? Is it that the lovers are struggling whether they love her enough to keep her alive or whether to kill her and accept the money? Do they know about each other, because I would assume that they would be a lot more willing to kill her if once theyRead more

    This could be fun! What draws out the conflict though? Is it that the lovers are struggling whether they love her enough to keep her alive or whether to kill her and accept the money? Do they know about each other, because I would assume that they would be a lot more willing to kill her if once they did find out about the others

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  3. Posted: July 11, 2020In: Comedy

    Upon being diagnosed with lung cancer, a lifetime litterbug tries to make the world beautiful for his depressed granddaughter before he dies.

    YaelEinstein Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 11, 2020 at 7:54 pm

    I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.

    I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.

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