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To regain his status in the high ranks of the order after a shameful ban, an arrogant, yet talented sorcerer sets off to hunt one of the most vicious rebels in the realm.
After a vicious outlaw kills a member of the ruling forces of a society, a young, yet talented sorcerer sets off to hunt him down in order to protect the people and prevent a potential war. I've used both the catalyst and the big event here. Better?
After a vicious outlaw kills a member of the ruling forces of a society, a young, yet talented sorcerer sets off to hunt him down in order to protect the people and prevent a potential war.
I’ve used both the catalyst and the big event here. Better?
See lessTo regain his status in the high ranks of the order after a shameful ban, an arrogant, yet talented sorcerer sets off to hunt one of the most vicious rebels in the realm.
So basically, this form "In order to save the lives of his people, an arrogant sorcerer sets off to hunt one of the most vicious outlaws that ever set foot in the realm." seems to be the best shot in your oppinion? I mean,would you read this script if it was on your desk,working at a studio? Btw, IRead more
So basically, this form “In order to save the lives of his people, an arrogant sorcerer sets off to hunt one of the most vicious outlaws that ever set foot in the realm.” seems to be the best shot in your oppinion? I mean,would you read this script if it was on your desk,working at a studio?
Btw, I very much appreciate your time and your help. Cheers.
See lessTo regain his status in the high ranks of the order after a shameful ban, an arrogant, yet talented sorcerer sets off to hunt one of the most vicious rebels in the realm.
The apprentice part is a good idea, thank you. What makes a good golden fleece is not the aquiring of the object, but the road and the experiences learn through it, that's what I'm aiming for. I think the hook would be the fact that as an apprentice, he goes against a very strong opponent, so basicaRead more
The apprentice part is a good idea, thank you.
What makes a good golden fleece is not the aquiring of the object, but the road and the experiences learn through it, that’s what I’m aiming for.
I think the hook would be the fact that as an apprentice, he goes against a very strong opponent, so basically him going against the rebel.? You think that’s not enough to intrigue a reader?
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