When you ignored the sparks of ones anger, might ignite a flames of rage…

Agree with the above comment. There are some elements missing... in fact, it reads more like a Tagline. However, it is well charged with irony and thus makes me curious to know more. You are succeeding on an important level but must give us a little more info I think.

Agree with the above comment. There are some elements missing... in fact, it reads more like a Tagline. However, it is well charged with irony and thus makes me curious to know more. You are succeeding on an important level but must give us a little more info I think.

This has a poetic touch, but in terms of writing loglines, it lacks the essential elements: who's the protagonist? Who's the antagonist? Where's the irony? Is there a time limit? What's the mission?

Answer these questions and then consolidate into a logline. I'm interested to see what you come up with - so I'll follow this thread. Thanks!