(6th revision) After performing a flowed mummification, a child must atone for shirking human souls from the Earth Spirit; after much suffering, he rises as Anubis, the judge of the dead.

by nicolesigaud · Logliner · 200 pts October 9, 2019 184 views

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AssaultRetribution · Initiate · 65 pts June 16, 2020

I think you mean 'flawed', but you can also say 'botched' or 'bungled' or even 'unsuccessful'.

Also consider making a new sentence for 'After much suffering..'

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