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Is this for a feature film or a series?
Agreed with all the above.
I'll add that in most cases when you find yourself using many adjectives or genre descriptions in a logline, you know something is wrong.
I think you need to tell us 'why' all these creatures want her head. What is so special about her, or what is so special about her mission/goal that everyone wants her dead?
What are they trying to stop?
Take this as an example: "When she discovers she's the descendant of the last dragon, a headstrong village girl must..." then tell us what her goal is and what she must do to achieve it.
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