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great point! I tried reading it out loud the way it is and ran out of breath! LOL Thanks!
Sounds like an epic battle indeed, but there seem to be too many elements and as such I can't decide which is the most important. How about missing out the bit about a time traveller, interesting as it is, to focus on the father and son? "A drug dependant father protects his autistic son against a demonic legion as he discovers the fate of the world lies within the boy's mind".
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