Posted: 2012-11-22T02:17:03+10:00 In:

A student fed up with life uses his student loans to go on a cross-country trip to a video game tournament, meeting his teammates along the way.

Wasted Youth

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    1. What does he stand to win? Is he just going for the experience? Is there somebody who he MUST beat in order to gain some form of self-fulfilment? Is there a ticking clock?

      I mean, I’ve seen movies described as you have in your logline and know to expect answers to the questions I’ve asked. But you need to answer all that for me in the logline.

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    2. Singularity

      “After going through rough times” is a bit bland. What bad things happen and who or what did them to Peter?

      “He realize that he does belong to the streets” This is not really plot, it is the conclusion. Plot is what he does to get to the conclusion.

      “Peter leaves home to experience the life going in the street” This is bland as well.

      “After escaping his hum drum middle class existence a (insert adjective) man must (do this) to stop (this bad person or situation) from (doing this) in order to survive the mean streets,”

      That was just an example; you really haven’t given us what the movie is about. So it’s difficult to give a good example of what your logline should be.

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    3. Singularity

      Sorry this was for the other logline

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    4. There doesn’t give us much here regarding stakes and reasons. Has he got to enter the tournament to win as he has spent all his loan? Could his friends be pivotal for his gaming style and has to pick them up, only they live on opposite sides of the country? So far the line tells us the a student is driving to a tournament and will meet people as he goes, we need to know more really.

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    5. more stakes, more obstacles!

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