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sorry double post,
Everyone else posted good feedback, so just 1 more- you have to give us more meat regarding the stakes. Maybe it's a 'storied franchise' or 'once legendary franchise', something to tell us why we would care about a football club.
Also, the protagonist needs to have something at stake, since the story is told through him. Maybe in order to get the job, he has to invest all his savings into the club, whatever.
Does the lack of revenue represent, lack of fans in the stands, lack of TV revenue, Lack of sponsors or perhaps salaries too high?
What is the young chairman's goal? How does he plan on raising revenue and what or who is standing in the way?
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