A man is accused by a fortune teller of being guilty of a series of crimes, which have not yet been committed; and what seemed like a bad joke turns into a nightmare when the police arrive looking for him, considering him the main suspect in a murder. Now he must flee to prove his innocence, before another death occurs.

by oscuro escriba · Logliner · 240 pts September 26, 2020 14 views

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Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts September 29, 2020

I wish there was an 'edit' button. (Because I am more of a re-writer than a writer)
Here is what I probably should have written.

“When he's accused by a fortune-teller of a murder he's yet to commit, a mild-mannered accountant must prove his innocence when the murder occurs and he's the prime suspect.”

oscuro escriba · Logliner · 240 pts September 28, 2020

Hola! Buena observación!

Lee Tolley · Initiate · 55 pts September 28, 2020

Hi Oscuro,

I feel this would benefit by bring fully into present tense.. i.e fleeing to prove his innocence before another death occurs.

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