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A young software programmer builds a loving avatar, which is the complete opposite of his personality. When this avatar frees a beautiful woman from her captors, embezzes a casino, and circumvents national security, he decides it’s time to cross the border: just have to try not to get killed on the way.
Richiev, este avatar es una especie de virus. No tiene la misma estructura moral de su creador; me lo imagino una suma de rebeldes y mujeriegos, ladrones encantadores y magos de la estafa. Y usaría todos los recursos de una…
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A young software programmer builds a loving avatar, which is the complete opposite of his personality. When this avatar frees a beautiful woman from her captors, embezzes a casino, and circumvents national security, he decides it’s time to cross the border: just have to try not to get killed on the way.
Odie, me imagino a este avatar conectado permanentemente a la red, buscando mujeres desesperadas para conversar. Una de estas mujeres está prisionera. El avatar logra burlar a sus captores, tal vez cruce llamadas o envíe falsos mensajes.
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In the middle of Nazi Germany, a shy girl and her imaginary monster try to rescue her father, who has disappeared.
Gracias Briancc!
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A lonely and renegade pigeon must abandon his reluctance and join the other park residents to expose a corrupt official, stop construction of the mall and save the old fountain, before the end of Independence Day.
Well, Odie, maybe Action is wrong. Besides the motivation is not enough, another detail; it must be more personal than community water. Here, an emotional charge unites the protagonist with the destiny of the source. Maybe he was born there…
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A lonely and renegade pigeon must abandon his reluctance and join the other park residents to expose a corrupt official, stop construction of the mall and save the old fountain, before the end of Independence Day.
Hola Richiev, si, lo sé. Quise variar el clásico principio "Cuando sucede..." y darle un enfoque diferente. Hay riesgos de que no resulte, ja ja! saludos!
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A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
That is the place for poetry. and subtlety. there may be great drama there. The hero's journey is to overcome his own emotional limitation. It would help to dress the character in a trait that places him at the start…
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In the middle of Nazi Germany, a shy girl and her imaginary monster try to rescue her father, who has disappeared.
Gracias Jeff.
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A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
Well, let's not forget that there must be a balance between goal, need, and obstacle. Here it is not entirely clear whether or not there is an equilibrium. What is the need: "you must lower your emotional guard." The objective?…
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In the middle of Nazi Germany, a shy girl and her imaginary monster try to rescue her father, who has disappeared.
With the support of stereotypes, I was able to advance part of the story.
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A man is accused by a fortune teller of being guilty of a series of crimes, which have not yet been committed; and what seemed like a bad joke turns into a nightmare when the police arrive looking for him, considering him the main suspect in a murder. Now he must flee to prove his innocence, before another death occurs.
Hola! Buena observación!
