To validate her self-worth, a cunning catfisher help victims reclaim their digital lives by revealing the truth and exposing the perpetrators.

by Ninann22 · Wordsmith · 320 pts 28 views

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Still thinking about the concept. A person switching sides to help the vulnerable. What do you think?

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Ninann22 · Wordsmith · 320 pts

This helps a lot. Thank you for the feedback.

Odie · Maestro · 6,290 pts

That's the word I was looking yesterday "reformed"!

Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts

I agree with variable,
"To validate her self worth..." isn't very compelling, nor does it answer the 'why now' question.

If your character is going to change her entire life, then the reason she changes her entire life should be just as big and compelling.

In fact, I would just drop the line altogether
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1: "A reformed catfisher uses her skills to help victims get justice by exposing the perpetrators."
2: Then add what happened to the lead that caused her change of heart, going from someone who exploited people to someone who now helps people.

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